It was like a Slimy Blob
It smelt like a Watery vivid
It felt like Alien juice
It looked like Sloppy glue
It looked like we were holding an Echo brain
It felt like a monster Blob
It makes a splatting sound
And It was my No.2 most disgusting thing I touched.
my Anzac button I made this using google
drawings
Mud glorious mud.
It looks like black cave slime.
It feels like chunky shoe.
It smells like hairy feet.
It looks like kinetic sand.
And it feels like wet playdoh.
It felt slimy like a bottom of a slug.
Its smells like dog burp.
I will never eat a fat, frog that fights flies.
I will never wear a fleshy, feather that fools fattys.
I will never buy a flying, flicking flamingo.
I will never do a fishy, foe flip.
I will never go to a fooling, fraud that farts fast.
I Will always like to think about a failed, foggy foam.
And I promise I will never be a frenzied, failing friend. 
thats a great work i remenber doing like that much sentnce
ReplyDeleteHi john thanks for the comment but can you work on your spelling and dont forget about punctuation.
DeleteWOW! I love your adjectives it was painting the picture in my head.Next time try using some similes and pictures.Other wise it was great!I remember doing this in my literacy class and I agree it was like a slimy blob!
ReplyDeleteHi Elias, I'm Zach from St Bernadette's School. A lot of creativity and thinking went into this blog post. I think the best bit was your Never poem. Next time could you put more description into the ANZAC button.My idea of a Never poem is "I would never fly on a frolicking freedom flyer through France". Keep up the good work.:)
ReplyDeleteThanks zach.
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