We have been learning to write a opinion, so we read some books about the things that a pigeon could get up to.
My opinion writing = pigeon needs a bath
The pigeon should have a bath.
What I think is that he should take a bath because if he does he will get friends, a comfortable sleep and he will be healthy.
If he does not have a bath he will lose friends, he will barely get any sleep and he will get lots of infections.
My other reasons are that friends wont help him anytime because they might catch a disease. The pigeon can die from illness.
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